.l.i.e.s.

By FindAgentX

why can't i concentrate?
.l.i.e.s.
whatever happened to that little girl?

asleep on the tiles

were they red or white first?

doesn't matter. she's gone like the faded melody./

wish you could've been there, instead of him..

holding her hand.. singing her to sleep.

instead of him beating her head against the tiles

her hands fluttered like birds

and he thought he was doing her a favor..

her hands and feet against the tile

flopping like fish

..drowning in air.

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Published on Sunday, March 14, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on ".l.i.e.s."

On Sunday, September 30, 2012, BetaWolfinVA (791) wrote:

very well done... shattering
On Sunday, October 2, 2011, Gray Vision (424) wrote:

This was an amazing read, it's always good to get a different perspective on a subject I've written on myself. Anyways, thank you very much for sharing this with us take care =)
On Saturday, September 27, 2008, Jonas (715) wrote:

dark poetry, truly. thank you for this piece of life.
On Tuesday, February 14, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653) wrote:

Wow, just wow!! Each line held it's own pain, it's own hurt. Amamzing. Julia~
On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

"her hands fluttered like birds". . . damn, this hurt. ripped my heart out. . completely and scratched at it with jagged nails. AMAZING work on this one, i'm completely feeling this. . pain. .
A former member wrote: very loose style, though effective. hard to discern the meaning, but several ideas come to mind, each more potent then the last.
On Monday, April 26, 2004, sulkylime (191) wrote:

thoughts and images
On Monday, April 26, 2004, sulkylime (191) wrote:

i'm glad red wolf commented because i agree, but i like it bc it's like a vague memory.. recollection of fleeting lost thoughts, or search for something that leads and links to another and another.. and in effect it creates a myriad of subtle/provoking th
On Sunday, March 14, 2004, Exodus (172) wrote:

very interesting....i like this...