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My Little Star
By Anybody_Killette
Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
up so high
up so far
I wish that I
could twinkle too
not for the world
just for you.
Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
why do you have
to be so far
so far from me
and I from you
Tell me my star
What shall we do?
Twinkle Twinkle
My little star
You don't have
to be so far
Just fall to the ground
It's not so high
So we can be together
You and I.
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Copyright 2004 Anybody_Killette
Published on Saturday, January 10, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "My Little Star"
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On Wednesday, March 21, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696)
wrote:
this was prettier than a snowflake :)
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On Saturday, April 29, 2006, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
this was another cool ryhme pattern and story.. and i liked it
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A former member wrote:
This had a very gentle, soothing feel to it. I liked the idea that the object you desire as a far away star. Nicely done. ~Ship!
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A former member wrote:
ooh wow in in love with this
nice work
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On Monday, July 19, 2004, Dommi
(95) wrote:
I absolutely loved this piece.. You are very talented. ^_^ Great work. I'm a fan hehe
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On Monday, January 12, 2004, TornPaperDoll
(63) wrote:
aww..i love it. it has sucha smooth flow to it.TPD
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On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Methos
(121) wrote:
I love this...it is a work of passion and reflects emotions i can relate to...beautifully done killette..-Methos
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