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Nothing Changes
By Lost_Soul
Can't find a reason...
Any reason to stay
Walking through the shadows of another day
Everything seems just like yesterday
Always feeling this sorrow
Too afraid to be happy
Drifting through life
I just can't go on anymore
Hoping someone will find me
Searching for that slight chance of love
But in the end...
Nothing changes
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Copyright 2003 Lost_Soul
Published on Saturday, November 29, 2003.
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A former member wrote:
Great piece... I can feel your loneliness and sadness.. Those things are my life companions too.. The second stanza touches me very deep.. Living shadows of another day.. I hope you come back.. Your works are awesome: :)
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On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171)
wrote:
wow, such a powerful write, I can relate to this as well, great job ~Emptyness~
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On Friday, June 18, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
exactly the way im feeling now. i can totally relate to this feeling..."but in the end...nothing changes"...freaking INDEED...i love this piece. -MeL-
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A former member wrote:
short and meaning full. i really liked it great write
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2004, Beautiful Scars
(175) wrote:
very poetic..great write. -fairy-
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A former member wrote:
This is like a very solemn lullaby. Your words were somehow soothing...I have no idea why.
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A former member wrote:
I like this one. It's a good poem, but I don't believe in destiny or a predetermined path. Very good. =-MO-=
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On Sunday, March 7, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
To the point, just shows the power of such literal poems, they can be just, if not more, powerful than metaphors...good job...^vTracerv^
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A former member wrote:
very strong...i like it and can very much relate
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A former member wrote:
Good post. Short and meaningful..+T.P.U+
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On Sunday, January 18, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
I agree very much with Storm, it won't change if you think it won't...I wish you'd post more poetry, I very much enjoyed reading this *~seraph~*
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On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
If you don't expect it to it never will. Nicely done, great write. Striking. ~S
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On Monday, December 22, 2003, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
This was appriciated. I love you profile..
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A former member wrote:
Sometimes you have to force things to change. Now how you force things to change...i have no idea. Such a sad write...
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
Change is a deceiver and a mask....you sure could put it all together...good to see from you. Well done.
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Raze Drake
(85) wrote:
Nothing changes, everything is the same. Good write. Reminds me of how we are all screwed in the end.
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A former member wrote:
everyone of those lines....their feeling in fact are engraved in my heart and soul and I where u are coming from....well written.... I mean that....
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A former member wrote:
*I know where u...(correction)
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On Sunday, November 30, 2003, Mischevious Princess
(28) wrote:
Matt...you're an excellent poet and your work is very good. I feel honored to be compared....I'm sorry you're having such a shitty time....
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
Such a sad but so seemingly true write . . I know these feelings . . you have expressed them very well. Nice write.
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On Saturday, November 29, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
the words seem to have crawled into my heart and fallen asleep there. this spoke volumes to me. ~Drea~
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