Surrender

By Crystal Passion

Spinning, whirling out of control
The off key balance that prevents
My mind from staying afloat


Sustaining the vertical fortitude
Rooted limbs that brace
..The melting shell
TO
THE
FLOOR


Reaching out for the body that binds
The shackled vessel
Locked within a stolen chest
That few are sworn to see


A rock to hold
As support gives way
To a million emotions

-Burning into that
which holds me steady


when at last forgotten breath
had been steadily taken
my eyes are turned to you


reaching the piercing layers
hidden beneath the glassy glow
within your eyes


I never knew you wanted me too.

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Copyright 2003 Crystal Passion
Published on Sunday, November 2, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: This is great how in the hell everyone spits out shit like this is beyond me but keep it up

  • A former member wrote: Simply beautiful. I really enjoy your work.

  • Crystal Passion On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    I was just glancing over my old works. This piece takes me back... I miss him so much.

  • _Andrew_ On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    i lvoe how you closed this kryz, very nice write >>

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    thank you drewby

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Monday, December 1, 2003, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    Amazing, just amazing, i like this alot, then again i like all your works ~Emptyness~

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    awww Josh you are a great person

  • GreekPhilosopher On Saturday, November 22, 2003, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Its Been Ages Since I Started Reading Other Peoples Work... And I Am So Glad That I Started With This One! Great. GPhD.

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    captain!! i havent been around in a while and coming across your comment was a wonderful wb!! :D

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, November 13, 2003, OLd SouL (717)By person wrote:

    I truly enjoyed reading this. Some powerful words and emotions locked in this one. :::OLd

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, SilentStalker (1047)By person wrote:

    ...amazing...what can I say, Kryz...? I love your writing... -Darun Scholar

  • Drea On Tuesday, November 4, 2003, Drea (1388)By person wrote:

    i like this princess. i can relate to it. great read. amazing write. ~Drea~

  • WinterGrave On Monday, November 3, 2003, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    dont go get yourself hurt now...guys have thing about hurting girls and not thinking nothing of it.~~~Grave

  • Six-Out On Sunday, November 2, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    New interests are always fun...but you always hope they last...yea.

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, November 6, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    where ahve you been?!?!

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