169 Words

By happilydepressed

It seems these days everyone including myself is constantly criticizising
Never ever apologizing
Never having something nice to say
Never having a good day
You get upset
Then you say things you'll eventually regret
You don't mean anything by your words
But they feels like swords
Thinking about friends you've had
Lost them just because you were mad
You try to cope
But you're losing hope
Try using some resistance
Learn some patience
No one's perfect
Not everyone has a high intellect
But everyone deserves a little respect
When you judge other people things start to reflect
But your too busy talking about someone else
To see what's wrong with yourself
Nothing gets accomplished
Just demolished
I wish there was some way
For everyone to have a wonderful day
Before you finish that sentence
Don't you feel any repentance
Because words are greater than any gun or knife
And just one can change a life
And in this little ryhme of mine
There is excatly one hundred sixty nine
 

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Copyright 2020 happilydepressed
Published on Saturday, October 3, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • themasterhunter On Saturday, October 3, 2020, themasterhunter (43)By person wrote:

    Excellent, refreshing, and brutal.

  • happilydepressed On Saturday, October 3, 2020, happilydepressed (409)By person wrote:

    thank you this is some of my early work and was a pain to make sure it had 169 words

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