Comments by themasterhunter
- "I really like this and i like how I really relate to this. good write, but i would use less abstract descriptions and go for a more streamlined, get to the point approach, rather than a long windy road that we (unconsiously) just skim through... alternatively, If you want to make your poems long, thats fine. use more rich words and and heart rythm.
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Posted by themasterhunter on "Feelings" by SinisterSinner
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