Moonrise o'er the Lustrous Seas
By Samael Crowe
Whispering leaves in the soft breeze
Underneath celestial red skies
The eyes of night now come to sight
And Luna stirs to make her rise
Mighty howling of a lone wolf
A greeting for his pearly queen
Enchantment cast by a bow of lust
The fairest visage ever seen
The mundane obscured by her flames
Softly caressing his deepest thoughts
Ardour in veins till the moon wanes
The anger of the jealous gods
Thickening fog from nearby trees
The unseen bounds, the darkened seas
Ominous sounds make dread profound
Still he stares and his howls resound
She answers his calling in great delight
Slowly draws to him, all clad in white
They both now dwell under the spell
Which makes the poets’ lives sublime
Hope for merging in passionate night
The tender embrace, bodies entwined
Ardent kisses ‘neath naked skies
Attainment of the peace of mind
Author's Note:
The Fountain of Stars, Part IComments on "Moonrise o'er the Lustrous Seas"
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On Wednesday, December 5, 2018, sTr8-jAcKeT
(697) wrote:
Loved the series brother, great thinking.
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On Thursday, December 6, 2018, Samael Crowe
(173) wrote:
Thank you:)
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A former member wrote:
This utterly took my breath away! So so beautiful. I have a deep connection with the moon and the sea, being in the ocean is the only place I have ever felt home. Love this exquisite ink
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On Friday, November 9, 2018, Samael Crowe
(173) wrote:
Thank you for your kind words Luna! I'm very glad that you liked it that much.
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On Monday, November 5, 2018, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Skillfully struck Sam and for a while there I thought it was going to be a maritime marvel. Nevertheless immensely enjoyed your internal rhyming in many of your third line stanzas. Whether man or beast the call of the wild is alive! Cheers my friend - Dan
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2018, Samael Crowe
(173) wrote:
Thank you dear Dan, I appreciate your feedback! I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
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On Monday, November 5, 2018, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
this is eloquent, well formed and worded, this was a joy to read, thanks for posting
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On Monday, November 5, 2018, Samael Crowe
(173) wrote:
Thank you very much! I am glad you enjoyed it.
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On Monday, November 5, 2018, LittleMissScareAll
(34) wrote:
I love the flow of the words, good piece.
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On Monday, November 5, 2018, Samael Crowe
(173) wrote:
Thank you:)