Liquid Cure Metaphors

By Sudos

Fingertips bleeding,
To let you taste bodily fluids...

My tears are like morning dew,
From breath you wasted alieviating hollow promises.

Eyes of emptiness,
Blue to you. I see nothing but red.

Depth. [Death]
My vortex fed sorrow's liquid cure metaphors 'til bitterness and it's end.

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Copyright 2019 Sudos
Published on Friday, May 13, 2022.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Samael Crowe On Saturday, August 10, 2019, Samael Crowe (174)By person wrote:

    I love the imagery of blue & red. This one is very powerful, I can sense and feel the anguish. Surely one of the best I've read recently. Great work, my friend!

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