stars fell like rain

By molock

it's been a while,
since I've seen
​your face.
still your memory
never seems to fade.
​from this darkness,
 there is no escape.
since that night the
​stars fell like rain...

just wanted to know,
why i was left standing
out in the cold?
you reached inside,
and turned my heart to
stone.
barely alive,
merely flesh and bone...

i haven't seen the light
of day,
in your absence
​....madness took it's
place.
with out you
i fell from grace.
left in the dark,
to defend  empty
​space,
alone  since that
night
the stars fell like rain....
 

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Copyright 2017 molock
Published on Monday, May 22, 2017.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Drea On Sunday, May 28, 2017, Drea (1450)By person wrote:

    Why are you so good? Seriously. The way you write just has such a musical feel to it. I will always been a fan. This is so beautiful. So much respect.

  • molock On Sunday, May 28, 2017, molock (318)By person wrote:

    Drea your comment truly touched me, from the bottom of my heart thank you so much. if it weren't for DP and people like you I wouldn't even be writing. peace sis - m0

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, dwells (4339)By person wrote:

    Liked the repeating line very much here Mo, but then that's just my proclivity for all things apocalyptic I'd suppose. Wondering what we'd do to each other if for real??? Cheers! - Dan

  • molock On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, molock (318)By person wrote:

    that is a scary thought my friend. I've been looking in to revelations a lot lately I feel like things are about to go down. peace my brother

  • Sidanne On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Sidanne (29)By person wrote:

    Love the long bowel sounds, and the ache and oh so alone feeling that emerges. Impactful imagery - I see utter darkness in a starless sky. Great write! Thank you for your work!!

  • Sidanne On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Sidanne (29)By person wrote:

    Oops! Vowel, not bowel!

  • molock On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, molock (318)By person wrote:

    thanks for the kind words, and taking the time to read my work. as for the typo I had a good chuckle ....thank you. lol

  • Soulfire On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Soulfire (98)By person wrote:

    "From this darkness there is no escape since that night stars fell like rain" Those lines are beautiful xox

  • molock On Sunday, May 28, 2017, molock (318)By person wrote:

    thank you so much for taking the time to read my work ...truly humbling - m0


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