stars fell like rain
By molock
it's been a while,
since I've seen
​your face.
still your memory
never seems to fade.
​from this darkness,
there is no escape.
since that night the
​stars fell like rain...
just wanted to know,
why i was left standing
out in the cold?
you reached inside,
and turned my heart to
stone.
barely alive,
merely flesh and bone...
i haven't seen the light
of day,
in your absence
​....madness took it's
place.
with out you
i fell from grace.
left in the dark,
to defend empty
​space,
alone since that
night
the stars fell like rain....
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On Sunday, May 28, 2017, Drea
(1388) wrote:
Why are you so good? Seriously. The way you write just has such a musical feel to it. I will always been a fan. This is so beautiful. So much respect.
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On Sunday, May 28, 2017, molock
(312) wrote:
Drea your comment truly touched me, from the bottom of my heart thank you so much. if it weren't for DP and people like you I wouldn't even be writing. peace sis - m0
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Liked the repeating line very much here Mo, but then that's just my proclivity for all things apocalyptic I'd suppose. Wondering what we'd do to each other if for real??? Cheers! - Dan
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, molock
(312) wrote:
that is a scary thought my friend. I've been looking in to revelations a lot lately I feel like things are about to go down. peace my brother
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Sidanne
(29) wrote:
Love the long bowel sounds, and the ache and oh so alone feeling that emerges. Impactful imagery - I see utter darkness in a starless sky. Great write! Thank you for your work!!
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Sidanne
(29) wrote:
Oops! Vowel, not bowel!
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On Wednesday, May 24, 2017, molock
(312) wrote:
thanks for the kind words, and taking the time to read my work. as for the typo I had a good chuckle ....thank you. lol
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2017, Soulfire
(96) wrote:
"From this darkness there is no escape since that night stars fell like rain" Those lines are beautiful xox
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On Sunday, May 28, 2017, molock
(312) wrote:
thank you so much for taking the time to read my work ...truly humbling - m0