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Blessings whispered to the Dawn
By Adagios
First whispered words
In worlds of frigid dust
May you play only in sunlight
And be safely home by dusk
May your line grow strong
With all the ashes of "almost"
As the root of every welcome
Is a kind and giving host
Be every sunlit thought you
Thought before the frost
For a dutiful good woman
Is a girl that's somewhere lost
Lose the illusions of what wasn't
Dreams don't gain one space
In a hope of recalled visions
Be the truth beyond disgrace
And being all that's needed
All that ever was or is
May you be for two my darling
So that we both still can live.
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© 2022 Adagios
Published on Tuesday, February 7, 2017.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Written Dec. 25, 2016. i don't recall it, but i don't recall most of that day.Comments on "Blessings whispered to the Dawn"
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A former member wrote:
I feel like I'm getting a glimpse into your beautiful soul and all of it's aches and pains. We all feel blessed to be reading your meaningful words, dear friend. Reb:).
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On Sunday, February 12, 2017, motherofnature
(46)
wrote:
may you be for two! life's mortality
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2017, dwells
(4177) wrote:
"For a dutiful good woman Is a girl that's somewhere lost" - particularly striking thought here A.; not only for the truth conveyed, but the unspoken sacrifices that will be taken for granted. The normal closing thought is for a loving partner; but I also see a similar linkage to mother and child maybe; kind of a father's prayer. Cheers my friend A. - Dan (This was exquisitely done)
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On Wednesday, February 8, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
Dan! As usual you are a bloodhound for the unspoken truths. It's so funny how we play so many roles among those we find irreplaceable, even man and women sort of cop aren't one another, filling deficits. You absolutely nailed my deep personal feelings for the person being written about. Cheers my friend, and thank you.
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2017, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
Wow... very haunting indeed. I like the hopeful tone carried across the mysterious and dismal words presented on such a festive day. Very interesting write. Thank you for sharing. - 10:43
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2017, Adagios
(716) wrote:
deep thks bro
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