Sorcerers apprentice in the Citadel of Magic

By Adagios



Sorcerers apprentice in the Citadel of Magic (clinician in psychiatric hospital)

Iambic meter (ABAC) (8-6-8-6)




Here in the halls of whispering
Among the chosen fair
The sweating walls are glistening
With mania and fear
The cinder blocks and plastering
Absorbed of madness calls
Are screaming silent agonies
Fractured as the painted walls
And in this fair veneer of health
Or healing as it's known
Alchemists called doctors practice
Magic hard as stone
Their capes replaced with white lab coats 
And potions to a pill
Our spells making sterility
Of the torment of the ill
Illusions in these aching halls 
Drive simple minds to crack
And prods, pokes and experiments 
Reveal what our subjects lack
Here in this mighty citadel
A spell lies on the door
Only opens for a conjurer
With magic badge in store
An unblinking eye remembers all 
And watches ceaselessly
These "camera" trolls in every room
Steal away all privacy
And worst is the effect of magic
On the wounded mind
Replaces visions and all hopes
With dullness and deep sighs
What can a sorcerers apprentice 
Hope to augur here
Among the dark powers of his day
In a fort of hope and fear
Here in the halls of whispering
Among the unlucky hosts
The screaming walls are listening
And of men creating ghosts
 



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Published on Wednesday, September 28, 2016.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "Here in the halls of whispering" this is such a good way to describe what it's like. This poem really hit home to me that (unlike myself) have a true knowledge of what these places are really like. Thank u for sharing this with me. I will deffo be working through all your inks but I like the synchronicity of this one coming to me now. I have spent a lot of time in mental institutions and so have wrote a lot about these times and even in these times like my one called "where's Daddy" which I wrote in there under the influence of loprazamine shots. I think the next one I will post will be another on this subject so if u follow my work then plz look out for it as I'm sure u will relate. We are not alone. Thank u my frien for this amazing ink

  • Adagios On Sunday, July 15, 2018, Adagios (716)By person wrote:

    I certainly will, I just read where’s daddy, man that’s a sledgehammer made of silk. Powerful words there, thanks for the visit and the feedback.

  • A former member wrote: The pills aren't the best way to go, as they tend to come with their own set of problems. Not many people can so eloquently portray the clinical setting in this poem, but you really aced it. Another worthy Poem Of The Day. Reb:).

  • dwells On Sunday, October 2, 2016, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Hi Ad - this extended metaphor also lends itself nicely to septameter; which would of course mean longer lines, and the 8 + 6 system employed here is a natural for that as well. Nevertheless, there is lots to like in this dark view that slowly reveals itself to the reader. Cheers! - Dan


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