The Monster Inside

By Just Dave

In the wind, so skinny he'd sway
He'd look straight down with nothing to say
His eyes would shift as soon as they're seen
They hide if he's kind. They hide if he's mean

Then one day the word came down
That scrawny kid put who in the ground?
How could they have been so blind
He's a freak, the most dangerous kind

"We'll hold him tight, for as long as we can
We won't let him out until he's a man"
His parents were told, "We'll break him you'll see
He'll want to be dead. He'll beg to be free"

He asked for no help. He wanted no shrink
He wanted no time. No time to think
He had a plan that couldn't be beat
Intricately woven to lay at their feet

"You wanted to know what you would find"
He said without reason. He said without mind
"I'll shine a light and then you'll see
The monsters inside. The monsters in me..."

"My brother died by my forced hand
If I had the chance I'd do it again
I can not apologize you see
For killing a man who twice raped me"

"He is as guilty as sin", the judge he said
As a father sits crying and holding his head
"You'll go away for a very long time
If sentencing is a job to be mine"

A family broken down to sides
When he was freed, with nothing to hide
He left that night, surreal and sublime
Hopefully leaving that child behind

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Copyright 2016 Just Dave
Published on Friday, August 4, 2017.     Filed under: "Abuse" and "Poetry"
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  • Michael J Smith On Sunday, June 2, 2019, Michael J Smith (16)By person wrote:

    Did you or the character like the act of killing? Was it enjoyable or just something that had to be done? I mean are you the Dexter of pedos or just a one time revenge seeker? Just curious.

  • Jonas Robinson On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Heartbreaking. What a horrible monster. It's good stuff, though. :)

  • A former member wrote: This is so so sad. I don't blame him (you?) I wish I had at least hurt my abusers. They should pay terribly for what they have done...justice. Excellent ink

  • Arwen On Saturday, March 24, 2018, Arwen (187)By person wrote:

    Your poem is truly real in every way possible.

  • Drea On Tuesday, September 12, 2017, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    I can't really express how much I enjoyed this. This reminds me of someone and I wish it didn't. You have a really interesting way of telling a story. Very well written.

  • A former member wrote: Wow. All I can really say is that this poem gave me chills. Since I can't really do this justice, I'll simply say well done. Rebs:).

  • bobbery On Saturday, July 22, 2017, bobbery (124)By person wrote:

    it is pretty amazing that you can write down such horror lived so clearly.

  • FangsInsanity On Tuesday, May 9, 2017, FangsInsanity (37)By person wrote:

    This is beautifully written, good job.

  • Maladroit On Friday, May 5, 2017, Maladroit (202)By person wrote:

    Truly... someone needs to make an illustration for this piece... I'm thinking... can you imagine, just for a moment what Silverstein would pair with this? Finally? The epic, brutal hideous cartoon that we all know lives inside of him? I'd email him but I ain't got that kind of sway.

  • A former member wrote: You capture the isolation incredibly well. This is a great write, and you deftly draw attention to the darker issues of the soul. That is a truly fearless thing to do.

  • 10 Forty Three On Saturday, September 24, 2016, 10 Forty Three (593)By person wrote:

    The way you make your poems flow so smoothly is incredible! Well done. - 10:43

  • SilenttPerception On Wednesday, September 14, 2016, SilenttPerception (27)By person wrote:

    Perfectly sewed together i must say really an enjoyable read. Awesome justdave awesome

  • Gray Vision On Monday, September 5, 2016, Gray Vision (425)By person wrote:

    This was awesome, they say the scariest individuals are the seemingly weak, quiet ones and it's true. We don't know the horrors that lurks in the minds of these individuals but every now and then, they share a glimpse of it with an unfortunate soul. Great write, keep up the spectacular work(:

  • A former member wrote: This was very deep and intense that your words left me in awe. This is a great piece because you poured you emotions in it. Brilliantly penned!

  • dwells On Sunday, April 17, 2016, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    A terrible tale, well and bravely told in verse JD, of a burden that shouldn't be borne by anybody - young or old alike. Hoping this was cathartic (life gets better, but never easy) Welcome to DP and Cheers! - Dan

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