Moon of October
By Nimue44
I stepped on the withered flowers
as I faced the mirror.
The creaking was the trigger.
Youth was long gone.
And dead
was the storyteller's King.
I still wondered: why does the nightingale sing?
Pale sunlight rocked with the curtains.
Lullabies bloomed in the gardens.
And time
So softly unfurled its wings
suspended in October air.
Dawn let slip a yawn.
Even silence stared.
A moth kissed the window with its forehead.
she had no scape to spare.
As the raven, she only spoke one word:
"Wail!"
And I did not.
Wrinkles, aches and mementos.
Of the realization, the crescendo.
Youth was long gone, as well as the storms.
But I was still beautiful,
Like thin paper that burns,
And so was my love.
For him, for the lanterns that to heaven still float.
I looked through the window
And the angel-moth landed.
And again commanded:
"Wail!"
And I did not obey,
Not to her hale.
Would she punish, would an oath she propose?
My feet still ached, on top of the musk rose.
How had I dreaded this moment!
How had I dreaded this omen!
How would I know that a soul
Never grows old?
That our shadows betray their owners
When they dance still, as loners?
"Wail!" She thundered.
I would not sunder,
No, no, less in October.
Then I remembered- I already have wailed.
Under an October moon, years ago.
I had became monsoon by tears stowed.
I was nineteen and stepped on the roses.
It was twilight and I stripped from all my clothes.
Naked, I was no longer prose.
My skin was soft. My toes, cold.
Long silken-auburn hair caressed my back.
And then I realized
I was no longer a child.
Thus, I danced.
To a song of myself that never lasts.
And the moon provided me light.
Magic- that's what I felt I was.
We were face to face, once again.
And I finally understood.
"Wail!"
I raised my head,
And long silken-silver hair caressed my back.
This was the closure of the Fourth act.
Aye, someone would wail.
But it would be the one who left music for trail.
I crossed the threshold to the garden
And to my bones I asked for pardon.
The grass was wet and fresh from the coven.
My wings were clipped
[that, he had been]
But I could still conquer.
Aye, someone would wail.
I did no longer ponder.
It would be the moon of October.
Author's Note:
Inspired of course, by Tuomas Holopainen, and he by Walt Whitman.Comments on "Moon of October"
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On Thursday, January 22, 2015, Flying indigo express
(148) wrote:
Eloquent expression of the truth of magic. I have a strong affinity for the fall moon, and this piece captured the feel of it.
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A former member wrote:
At times all one can do is sing, but flying with clipped wings is impressive indeed. Superbly written, a snowy winter tale unfolded before my eyes.
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On Monday, January 5, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Why, thank you!
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On Tuesday, December 16, 2014, nkronsch
(16) wrote:
Damn! Excellent imagery and an absolutely sublime story. Great would be an understatement -- Absolutely loved it. 10. Keep it up and blessed be ~peace
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On Wednesday, December 24, 2014, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
*Bows back* Thank you.