Love Ballad
By megaprime81
More and more I feel
I'm losing my mind
Never met someone like you
You're one of a kind
Searching deep within my heart,
You're all I can find
I love you more than I can say
I'm losing my mind
No one can save me
In love I went crazy,
Baby
My love, my life,
Everything goes to You
My heart it beats
Only for You
I'm going crazy,
Baby
I long to touch you
And brush your hair
For you
I've never felt like this
Distance has torn me in two
No one can save me
In love I went crazy,
Baby
My self, my health
I'd give it all for You
My life for You
I say this in truth
In love I went crazy,
Baby
O, O, O ,O
As i sit i think
And know in my heart
I want nothing to
Tear us apart
I'm going crazy,
Baby...
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Author's Note:
Note: I had to change your love drove me crazy to in love i went crazy, as Bon Jovi had written the former; thus, it had to be changed to the latter. Not quite as good, but it still works.Comments on "Love Ballad"
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A former member wrote:
I love this.... this is exactly how I am feeling right now..... so crazy to be so in love... awesome poem!
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On Tuesday, April 29, 2014, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
In order to be truly in love, we have to be crazy. Then once the heart is filled, we're completely insane. I like this shade of your talent. Excellent. Later -
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A former member wrote:
Wicked ballad with just the most perfect mood! Desperate, and slightly obsessive. Just a wonderful piece! =)
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On Friday, April 11, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
it's a short trip for me... this is a cool ballad. It has a nice smooth rhythm :)
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On Friday, April 18, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Alas, I've discovered that i unwittingly got the part about "Your love drove me crazy, baby" from Bon Jovi's "This Ain't a Love Song", so I have to do a bit of a re-write.