Love Ballad

By megaprime81

More and more I feel
I'm losing my mind
Never met someone like you
You're one of a kind

Searching deep within my heart,
You're all I can find
I love you more than I can say

I'm losing my mind
No one can save me

In love I went crazy,
Baby

My love, my life,
Everything goes to You
My heart it beats
Only for You

I'm going crazy,
Baby

I long to touch you
And brush your hair
For you
I've never felt like this
Distance has torn me in two

No one can save me
In love I went crazy,
Baby

My self, my health
I'd give it all for You
My life for You
I say this in truth

In love I went crazy,
Baby

O, O, O ,O
As i sit i think
And know in my heart
I want nothing to
Tear us apart

I'm going crazy,
Baby...

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Friday, April 11, 2014.     Filed under: "Love" and "Lyrics"

Author's Note:

Note: I had to change your love drove me crazy to in love i went crazy, as Bon Jovi had written the former; thus, it had to be changed to the latter. Not quite as good, but it still works.
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  • A former member wrote: I love this.... this is exactly how I am feeling right now..... so crazy to be so in love... awesome poem!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, April 29, 2014, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    In order to be truly in love, we have to be crazy. Then once the heart is filled, we're completely insane. I like this shade of your talent. Excellent. Later -

  • A former member wrote: Wicked ballad with just the most perfect mood! Desperate, and slightly obsessive. Just a wonderful piece! =)

  • blue angel On Friday, April 11, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    it's a short trip for me... this is a cool ballad. It has a nice smooth rhythm :)

  • megaprime81 On Friday, April 18, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Alas, I've discovered that i unwittingly got the part about "Your love drove me crazy, baby" from Bon Jovi's "This Ain't a Love Song", so I have to do a bit of a re-write.


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