Nightsweats
By megaprime81
I ran into a nightmare
Halfway through a dream
I couldn't find my voice
I couldn't even scream
I sold a solemn yesterday
For a string of broken lies
I found out for myself
There are no alibis
I woke up in a sweat
Couldn't get back to sleep
Even dreamers scream
And i am the blackest sheep
And for all my concentrated effort
I couldn't get back to sleep
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, February 11, 2014.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
This just came to me. I'm back to writing. Yay! Thank you, Sweet angel, for your advice.Comments on "Nightsweats"
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A former member wrote:
Fuck yeah, I like it!
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A former member wrote:
i love your flow . thanks for sharing
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you. I'd be nothing without dp's support. 'specially my angel.
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
The restless mind, fights against the nightmarish realm. Avoid spicy foods. Seriously, they can cause nightmares,, as well. I have suffered from night terrors since I was a little girl. It can be agonizing at times.. Much peace to you. nice poetry. Well done :)
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I meant to say, 'You're very welcome' too... I saw your authors note.. It's nice to know someone is listening. :)
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Normally i sleep very well; except for waking up two or three times, i did o.k. But i've had moments in dreams where i would try to scream and nothing would come out. I appreciate you, angel.
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Me too, the not being able to scream, thing.. or run.. BTW that first stanza is incredible... *I hope your sleep improves*
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Reminds me briefly of the poem "Dream within a Dream" by Edger Allen Poe ... just the concept of thought,, really...the realization of picking your brain apart trying to figure out how to approach the situation. I really enjoyed this one from you, Prime. Bows-
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On Tuesday, February 11, 2014, megaprime81
(740) wrote:
Thank you.