The Thrill...( It's worth it )

By A Velvet Tongue

Saints turn to sinners
and paupers to princes
lust turns to splinters
and winks turn to winces
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Strength crumbles to dust
and virgins to whores
ideals are soon musts
and skimmers soon soar
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Rags turn to riches
and faith leads to ruin
brusies lace stitches
and nothing's worth doin'
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Life soon finds death
and lungs breath no air
tears soon find breath
and bodies are bare
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Soft turns to scars
and farces find truth
near has become far
and thorns roughly soothe
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Love rides the hate
and battles are lost
fiction finds fate
and up jumps the cost
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Perfection is dwindled
and truth just cant see
naiviety is swindled
and shackles are freed
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Desire turns foolish
and thoughts sleep dormant
angels turn ghoulish
and love is pure torment
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Hearts can turn bitter

........and they often will

Winners breed quitters

...........and it's all worth the thrill

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Published on Tuesday, August 26, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "The Thrill...( It's worth it )"

On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, IAmNorge (38) wrote:

the rhythm is perfect, usually I'm against rhyming because the rhyme to me kills the meaning but this is amazing, good work and great imagination
On Monday, April 3, 2006, monalisamarie (113) wrote:

Nice imagry and an almost musical rhythm
On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, The Fallen Angel (234) wrote:

OH Hell Yeah!...A thing of Beauty and Enlightment is truly yours! +Fallen Angel+
On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

another triumph...I gotta go with six on this you just keep getting deeper and deeper.
On Monday, September 1, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

Sometimes Deep is the only place I can sleep within.. the blanket is just so warm..almost like a womb...Im glad you enjoyed this...it runs very close to my core..
On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Dammmmmn Vel, you get deeper and deeper with every poem. At least you can't yell at me for not reading your stuff now! :-D
A former member wrote: lyrics, these are, not just poetry...
On Tuesday, August 26, 2003, _Andrew_ (245) wrote:

very nice vel... sorry for lack of commenting, rather depressed at the moment, all these poems are makin me feel shitteh, nice write hun *~*aNDReW*~*