Bruised

By megaprime81

Yesterday I fell asleep
Drowning in sorrow
Dreading tomorrow
Now today is yesterday
Half awake I've gone away
Never knowing if I'll come back
Half my dreams are painted black
Today gets wasted
Every day
I envy those who go away
Wanting now to be like them
Knowing that I cannot stay
Half awake forever

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Wednesday, January 29, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I composed this on the fly before going to the library.
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  • SickSanityJenn On Thursday, February 13, 2014, SickSanityJenn (250)By person wrote:

    Very good!! :) I like it a lot

  • megaprime81 On Sunday, February 2, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Sometimes i suffer from Writer's Block, then get the attack of the muse that gets me writing.

  • soul_versing On Friday, January 31, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    Last minute writing poses the best thoughts. I'm always on the edge of insanity before I write though... Which isn't as often as I'd like. An enjoyable read, prime. Bows- Scholar

  • blue angel On Wednesday, January 29, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    Lowly emotions pour out through every line. Nice write :)

  • megaprime81 On Thursday, January 30, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you. :-)


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