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She saw the heaven
Open up and the sky was
Full of bleeding hearts
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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Saturday, January 11, 2014. Filed under: "
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On Friday, December 29, 2017,
Just Dave
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wrote:
Short. Sweet. And thought provoking. JD
On Friday, January 31, 2014,
soul_versing
(774)
wrote:
Even in all his glory he sympathizes to those who've had a loss of a loved one. Beautiful and straight forward. Bows-
A former member wrote: I had to re-read it a couple of times, but this haiku is so powerful. Its few words speak speeches.
On Saturday, January 11, 2014,
megaprime81
(740)
wrote:
Thank you. It's interesting, but haikus come to me pretty easily; this one i got what i wanted to say first, then worked on getting it to fit syllable wise.
On Saturday, January 11, 2014,
blue angel
(866)
wrote:
love it.. it is very powerful in its simplicity. I like Haikus a lot ... this one is very well done.. Nice!
On Saturday, January 11, 2014,
megaprime81
(740)
wrote:
Thank you, angel. I aim to please.
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