Dizeazed Maggotbrain

By megaprime81

He walks the darkest halls
In broad daylight
Head hanging limply from his neck
His mouth opens half-way
And maggots spill forth on the tiles

Who is he?
Who is he?

The floor cracks open
To welcome his black soul back
He still roams the Earth
Despite the heart-attack
He wants revenge for being in this state
He replaces misery with mountains of sordid hate

Who is he?
Who is he?

He falls into the cracks
At the time of the great Earthquake
As he continually roasts
He's still half-baked
The world never knew
Such a heathen as he
Yet there's one thing left a mystery

Who is he?
Who is he?

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Copyright 2014 megaprime81
Published on Tuesday, January 7, 2014.     Filed under: "Poetry"

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Who is he?
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  • soul_versing On Friday, January 31, 2014, soul_versing (774)By person wrote:

    I think it's Cain from "See no Evil" ...that movie scared me to sleep with lights on for a while. Ugh... The image is haunting. So... "who is he..?" Scholar

  • Void Vortex On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    I wanna know who he is!!! I think I wanna help him :] Nasty undead goodness! LIKE!

  • A former member wrote: Zombie...:3 i loved the way you wrote this, and yeah, that question keeps kinda lingering inside my head....especially since zombies are about as nameless as the people you kill in CoD, or the deranged psychos from Bioshock....plus zombies arent that smart...maybe he has memory lossor such...it really keeps me thinking. Great, great write!

  • A former member wrote: Impressive story and descriptive verses

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you. I appreciate the kind words.

  • blue angel On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, blue angel (866)By person wrote:

    I love zombies... and I love the way you bring him from the depths and with such vengeance ;)~ Well written*

  • megaprime81 On Wednesday, January 8, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you, angel. :-)

  • A former member wrote: The dead both envy and hate the living it would seem. Can't blame them really. This was quite an intruiging write, kept me on the edge of my seat so to speak. Absolutely brilliant.

  • megaprime81 On Tuesday, January 7, 2014, megaprime81 (740)By person wrote:

    Thank you. It just came to me.


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