wasted kisses

By torn_beauty

Temptation called to me,
in a tender whisper...
I gave in for the night,
and love became a twister...
In the morn, when I woke,
my heart began to blister...
When I saw you sneaking out,
whispering I should not have kissed her....

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Copyright 2013 torn_beauty
Published on Monday, December 16, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, April 23, 2018, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Ouch...Always hard to take but one of those lessons. This reminds me of stories I'd hear when I was a Uni student. Short, to the point and very well done.

  • A former member wrote: ..sounds like you need to put out that fire your valentine set in your house before everything in your life is wasted and burnt to the point where you cant touch anything withiout feeling it fall between your fingers like grains of sadn....

  • torn_beauty On Wednesday, December 18, 2013, torn_beauty (77)By person wrote:

    Thanks for the imput everyone! I found a title

  • Dejected_Worth On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, Dejected_Worth (81)By person wrote:

    Such a sad tale.. if it was up to me to title it, I'd go with... "the day before he went missing" Grate write

  • Intoxicating Delirium On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium (273)By person wrote:

    Its hard to pick titles, isn't it ?! Nice job with this though, I like it a lot. Nice write :)

  • PoetessDarkly On Tuesday, December 17, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    most beautiful. I like the title twisted sister

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