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For poets whom I can feel
By veingo
Feed me with your words.
Speak of
the sweetest fruit
the smoothest cream
the most delicious wine.
Touch me with your breath.
like a cool wind
from the mouth of a deep cave
on summer's hottest day.
Caress me with your thoughts.
Explain the sensation
of drawing near the fire
having come in from the freezing rain.
Heal me.
Inspire me.
Sustain me till the end of time.
Like your words, that live forever.
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© 2007 veingo
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On Monday, February 17, 2020, carlosjackal
(3011)
wrote:
Ah, the sweetest of inspiration. Juicy, delicious, preserved forever.
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A former member wrote:
I feel you. :)
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On Sunday, May 25, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
♥ needed to see something like this tonight...
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A former member wrote:
i want the same. but then again, who doesnt? a poet needs something to feel and that's our biggest need and flaw...
loved it. great write awesome read.
-mars
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A former member wrote:
I crave the same thing as you wrote here
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On Friday, July 13, 2007, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
these words i feel..........well done
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On Wednesday, July 11, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
How did I miss this, sheesh, absolutely perfect. Refreshing as carlos said.
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A former member wrote:
expressed deftly and deciduously, like leaves falling softly upon command. .. amen
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On Monday, July 2, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
This was spot on. "like a cool wind/from the mouth of a deep cave/on summer's hottest day." A breath of fresh air. -Carl
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On Monday, July 2, 2007, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
oooo..that just sank right in to my skin! i have to fav it.
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On Monday, July 2, 2007, Err0r
(365) wrote:
This is a gorgeous write Ron. We all have so many inspirations, but few really can put into words about inspiration from other poets. Very nice.
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A former member wrote:
ooooooh...I like this piece. Such an amazing tribute, put into words that could relate to anyone. Excellent, Ron. Excellent. ~*Beth*~
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