For poets whom I can feel

By veingo

Feed me with your words.

Speak of

the sweetest fruit

the smoothest cream

the most delicious wine.

Touch me with your breath.

like a cool wind

from the mouth of a deep cave

on summer's hottest day.

Caress me with your thoughts.

Explain the sensation

of drawing near the fire

having come in from the freezing rain.

Heal me.

Inspire me.

Sustain me till the end of time.

Like your words, that live forever.

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Published on Sunday, July 1, 2007. Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

Comments on "For poets whom I can feel"

On Monday, February 17, 2020, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

Ah, the sweetest of inspiration. Juicy, delicious, preserved forever.
A former member wrote: I feel you. :)
On Sunday, May 25, 2008, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

♥ needed to see something like this tonight...
A former member wrote: i want the same. but then again, who doesnt? a poet needs something to feel and that's our biggest need and flaw... loved it. great write awesome read. -mars
A former member wrote: I crave the same thing as you wrote here
On Friday, July 13, 2007, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

these words i feel..........well done
On Wednesday, July 11, 2007, Mylissa (825) wrote:

How did I miss this, sheesh, absolutely perfect. Refreshing as carlos said.
A former member wrote: expressed deftly and deciduously, like leaves falling softly upon command. .. amen
On Monday, July 2, 2007, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

This was spot on. "like a cool wind/from the mouth of a deep cave/on summer's hottest day." A breath of fresh air. -Carl
On Monday, July 2, 2007, torn_beauty (77) wrote:

oooo..that just sank right in to my skin! i have to fav it.
On Monday, July 2, 2007, Err0r (358) wrote:

This is a gorgeous write Ron. We all have so many inspirations, but few really can put into words about inspiration from other poets. Very nice.
A former member wrote: ooooooh...I like this piece. Such an amazing tribute, put into words that could relate to anyone. Excellent, Ron. Excellent. ~*Beth*~