Rusty words.
By torn_beauty
Sickness. Such sickness. Love sickness.
What a silly mess to cause such distress.
I don’t love you, you know.
But oh, this sickness!
Stop being angry with me,
I can tell by your silence,
So don’t lie to me.
I hate this feeling. I hate your disappointment. Please just understand…
Jealousy. Such jealousy! Stupid jealousy.
Why such emotion? Why such concern?
I don’t love you, you know.
But oh, this Jealousy!
Stop playing with me,
I can tell by your tone,
So don’t lie to me.
Insecure? Me, I remember when I was the girl who caught your eye, so long
ago…
Heart ache. Stupid heart ache. My heart ache.
If only I could have not met you four years since.
I don’t love you. I don’t.
But oh, how it aches!
Stop loving me, please,
I can tell by your words,
But please, just leave me be…
I would take my heart out. I would put it away. If only, if only I wanted
it that way….
Comments on "Rusty words."
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A former member wrote:
I liked it, I believe I captured your idea a feeling that is one hard to explain. The playing with words very creative, Keep it UP!!! I would like to see more!
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On Friday, November 29, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Marvelous job and my head is spinning, some things just can't be put to rest, cheers!
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On Wednesday, November 27, 2013, horrorchantenshi
(36) wrote:
Really really nice. I like how you word it. Very interesting.