She Shut Me Down

By megaprime81

She shut me down
Soon as I said "Hey" to her
Had to go to lunch
Can't say i blame her
'Cuz i don't

No one could love
A screwed up wretch like me
No one would believe
That i cling to sanity at all
And so is my downfall

She shut me down

She shut me down
Story of my life
Always been shut down
Can't say i function right
And so is my disaster
So is my plight

She shut me down

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Published on Saturday, October 12, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

The truth usually hurts...but it's better to admit it than hold it in.

Comments on "She Shut Me Down"

On Wednesday, February 12, 2014, blue angel (866) wrote:

I saw this on the featured work on the home page... it's an awesome piece of poetry ,, nice seeing it up again :)~
On Thursday, November 28, 2013, A soulless dark angel (35) wrote:

I know how you feel...And I still do. Guys aren't always compatible with girls. And girls aren't always compatible with guys. But remember to negatives make a positive, and sometimes that's not always the case. My former love and I used to he polar opposites, but then he made me like him. I'm only "the monster he made me" as pop evil said. And now that I'm like him, I can no longer exist to him.
On Wednesday, November 20, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...man, that's rough & too familiar. reminds me of the Hanks & Lovitz sketches on SNL, could'nt pick up a babe to save their lives...
A former member wrote: If it doesn't work out,don't feel bad. There's always other people!
On Tuesday, November 19, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Well, there are plenty of good women out there...how do you find them in such a small, ass-backward town like this one?
A former member wrote: I've been in your shoes before.
On Saturday, October 12, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

Yeah...but i'm sure you're not still there. As for me...
A former member wrote: Just be yourself and if she can't like you for who you are then its her problem.
On Saturday, October 12, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

That's just it--isn't just her. It's all of them. So...the problem lies with me.
A former member wrote: There are more woman than there are men with a whole bunch of different personalities, so you may click with one personality and not click with another, im saying don't give up
On Saturday, October 12, 2013, megaprime81 (740) wrote:

appreciate it. if woody allen can find women who like him, hey, anyone can!