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xXBuild the MasterXx
By Deathkitten
Opening minds
from a state of
delirium
Once blocked
by opaque blinds
Build the master
Cell
by
Cell
Relay messages
through messengers
in hopes to nurture
the weak
& intimidated
Leading them
out labyrinths
of thoughtless
progression
into
the starkness
of truth
Saving all
will be a challenge
one might resist
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Friday, August 2, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Simply weak bodied or weak minded? Maybe both? Can they be nurtured? And if so could they handle 'truth'? Hmm could be there is no universal truth, it is whatever we make of it I guess. Thought provoking read, gives me something to ponder.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, darkheartmagic
(82)
wrote:
I love every line from start to finish very well written you really have a way with words.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Aww...thank you, as do you! :)
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, soul_versing
(883) wrote:
I shall follow you kitten. "the starkness of truth Saving all." This line is badass! Bows-
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you veddy much, TG :)
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
'Opening minds from a state of delirium...' sometimes those minds need to be opened in order to see. Blindness will only get you so far sooner or later you have to see the light in order to see the starkness in the truth... excellent write Kitten.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you for having a better grasp on it, Nikki :)
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
...will set you free (MLK). The master being built cell by cell - some multi-cellular organism maybe, or the main lockup for the inmates, pondering.
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I like hearing some of your thoughts. You often dig deep & slightly to the left...fiddling isn't always bad. Thanks, Dan. Ponder away ;)
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, haunted
(849) wrote:
hmm, sounds like a case of the blind leading the blind maybe. I think giving the vulnerable or weak a place to go is noble. the discarded can flourish but not all can be saved. I think I got that understood, but I still cant see anything! hmm, lol...if this makes no sense to you, im with you. lol...its all in the eye of the beholder. so behold! nice poem jess!
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I'll be honest, I am slightly taken by this comment, however, I am glad you're with me. Thanks!
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
"Saving all will be a challenge one might resist" I'm following you on that ;)~ Wow, kitten this is a refreshing write, I really dig it !! Nicely thought out !! *hugs* to you*
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Ahaha well thank you, Miss Kendra :)
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