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+Teach me helpless+
By Deathkitten
Bloodied hands
won't you stretch across
your owner's mangled face
Spit your rusted foam
to show anguish & distaste
Flail around
& teach me helpless
It's a daring thing
to please the monster
Your reckless motion
absorbs like fluid
into dry sponge
Conquer wellness
& tame behavior
Let loose
your battle cry
as a screaming banshee
would reply
in defense
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Friday, July 26, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Come & get it!Comments on "+Teach me helpless+"
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A former member wrote:
Sounds like a brawl! I want to smear on some war paint and join the fun! Haha really enjoyable read.
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, tmanzano
(210)
wrote:
Oh so lucky that monster is... helpless is a beautiful look on some. Tantalizing read here. (cold shower)
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Haha thank you, tman :)
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Oh god i think i just came .. come and get it. damn it.. mmmmmmmm
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On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Glad to see you can still feel me ;)
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, haunted
(849) wrote:
nice poem jess, sounds like some suffering to me is at stake. maybe laughing at its torment. I don't know just the way I read it. excellent poem.
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Suffering yes...thank you, Todd :)
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Sounds like somebody might be getting a moustache ride, or something, but then I'm probably wrong as usual, cheers Jes and still pondering!
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Lmfao...wtf? Where did that come from? Only you,. Dan haha okay & maybe Todd. Thanks!
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
ohhhh lioness ... and to think i was gonna run the other way in the beginning... something tells me i need to regroup put my headdress on ..... oh, will keep that to myself. Much enjoyed hon
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Ahaha hmm...keep what to yourself?
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
My inner Indian wants to smear bloody war paint all over my face and run with the wind.... Love this kitten ;)~
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
The Italian in me tells me to run after you haha thank you ;)
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