+Teach me helpless+

By Deathkitten

Bloodied hands
won't you stretch across
your owner's mangled face
Spit your rusted foam
to show anguish & distaste
Flail around
& teach me helpless
It's a daring thing
to please the monster
Your reckless motion
absorbs like fluid
into dry sponge
Conquer wellness
& tame behavior
Let loose
your battle cry
as a screaming banshee
would reply
in defense

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Published on Friday, July 26, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Come & get it!

Comments on "+Teach me helpless+"

A former member wrote: Sounds like a brawl! I want to smear on some war paint and join the fun! Haha really enjoyable read.
On Friday, July 26, 2013, tmanzano (207) wrote:

Oh so lucky that monster is... helpless is a beautiful look on some. Tantalizing read here. (cold shower)
On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Haha thank you, tman :)
On Friday, July 26, 2013, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Oh god i think i just came .. come and get it. damn it.. mmmmmmmm
On Saturday, July 27, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Glad to see you can still feel me ;)
On Friday, July 26, 2013, haunted (837) wrote:

nice poem jess, sounds like some suffering to me is at stake. maybe laughing at its torment. I don't know just the way I read it. excellent poem.
On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Suffering yes...thank you, Todd :)
On Friday, July 26, 2013, dwells (4177) wrote:

Sounds like somebody might be getting a moustache ride, or something, but then I'm probably wrong as usual, cheers Jes and still pondering!
On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Lmfao...wtf? Where did that come from? Only you,. Dan haha okay & maybe Todd. Thanks!
On Friday, July 26, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175) wrote:

ohhhh lioness ... and to think i was gonna run the other way in the beginning... something tells me i need to regroup put my headdress on ..... oh, will keep that to myself. Much enjoyed hon
On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

Ahaha hmm...keep what to yourself?
On Friday, July 26, 2013, blue angel (866) wrote:

My inner Indian wants to smear bloody war paint all over my face and run with the wind.... Love this kitten ;)~
On Friday, July 26, 2013, Deathkitten (571) wrote:

The Italian in me tells me to run after you haha thank you ;)