-The Clincher-
By Deathkitten
My deadly stream runs
across your cold, tired feet
Flowing gracefully into the unknown
Another body to retain me
Perhaps an end
with algaed leaves & dying grass
or old stones & bilobed sassafras
Do you follow me
if we never find out?
Do you try to plummet
as the pebble
into something plummetless?
Do you softly complain
of the hallowed mystery?
If there be an abrubt end
or an everlasting adventure
The risk is yours
and that's the clincher
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Published on Monday, June 10, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
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A former member wrote:
Risk is good, keeps you on your toes, so to speak. Besides how would people have fun without any risk? Ah I guess I just figured it out... People just don't have fun anymore ;)
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On Saturday, June 15, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
I like em on their toes haha I'd say I definitely fall into the "Risk Taker" category. It's all about persuasion! Thanks :)
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
that sounds really delicious, I don't give a shit what happens in this clincher. I would walk on broken glass all the way to south Carolina just so you could nurse my wounds. that's my clincher. very nice jess!
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Ahaha damn Todd...that's alot of glass.
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Might as well err on the side of eternity, but then too a long life in this temporal world can seem like an eternity too! Cheers, and much enjoyed the philosophical metaphor.
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Yes it can. Thank you, Dan :)
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A former member wrote:
An everlasting adventure? Those are the best kind.
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
I know right! Thank you :)
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I stand on the edge of the abyss , the cold dark abyss...Arms spread, welcoming the unknown. This type of poetry elevates me ~^_^~ Wonderfully expressed, kitten ;) xxx
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Ooh...edges are dangerous. You could slip! Luckily, you find me elevating ;) xxx
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, xZombie Poptartzx
(332) wrote:
Your way of saying you come with a warning label? Nice write, I enjoyed this :) xoxo
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On Tuesday, June 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
I guess you can look at it that way. Thank you :)
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On Monday, June 10, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Mmmmmmmm.. and that 's the clincher.. damn it.. lol. the tags read it right. get em girl. it least you gave fair warning..
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On Monday, June 10, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Don't I always? Why're you mmmming me now haha ;)