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Humans
By Deathkitten
Slice my tongue with your kiss
You don't know how long i've wanted this
Eye me like a hungry beast
Tonight's the night we shall feast
Venomous blossoms await
For innocent to take the bait
Luring with vibrant luster
Leaving infinite time to muster
Execrating
Eradicating
Spurting fountains
Stacked in mountains
So...invigorating
Humans are so precious to me
Without them
Where would we be?
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Comments on "Humans"
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant! Love how it leaves the reader hanging and wondering what it could possibly be. Great pen work :)
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On Thursday, February 14, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
and what kind of beast is the predator? brilliant writing :)
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On Thursday, February 14, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
The world may never know. Thank you :)
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2013, FearlessDragon
(138) wrote:
I like where the ending takes the reader. Your word choices make this such a haunting piece! Splendid!
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On Monday, February 11, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Too much to sort through. They gave up reading me already hah
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Their loss and the faithful will return (but Sun & Mon are bummers). Also - at my peril (I used to do likewise) - click on the reply button on a comment, rather than on the work "comment" hot spot. That way your comment to a comment will go underneath the intended original comment - keep things better organized about who said what to whom, thanks DK!
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
I do the comment thing out of habit. For the longest time, I didn't know how to reply underneath. I started up on mobile device & it doesn't clarify as much as much as being on the computer. So all the little icons threw me off...I played it safe. Always a reason. Thanks for the tip ;)
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On Monday, February 11, 2013, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Spoken like a true predator, but then the soft underbelly comes into play, and the spurting fountains betray (HA!). Well done lady and where are all the comments because this was vintage DP?
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