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Fury
By Deathkitten
Precious mortals displaying affection
The sequence of events surpassing
expectations
Chain reactions on the rise
Signaling the universe
to open wide
Blasphemy fills your void
Negligence betrays in
such a way
Don't play me as a toy
I'll leave you where
you lay
It's quite a lump to swallow
Beware of what you follow
Stigmatized am I?
It's too bad you cannot fly
Tainted wings
of paradise
No such thing that can suffice
Gargoyles protect
my palace
Bring forth your lies & malice
We are never lenient
You can't fight a mind so militant
Consider yourself fair warned
A pity you ever tried
And against fury of a woman scorned
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Copyright 2013 Deathkitten
Comments on "Fury"
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On Thursday, February 14, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
ohh wow... would not want to be the one that pissed you off so... well written declaration of someone who has dotted the t and crossed the I (marital/martial) (alls fair in love and war)
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A former member wrote:
Cool...I like a fighter. You gotta take a stand some days. Let's go bully the bullies...
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2013, FearlessDragon
(138) wrote:
Had me from the first line and had a death grip on me the rest of the way! Love this!
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Thank you so much for reading & taking interest in my writes & all the kind words. I am glad to know you enjoy :)
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Wow! Impressed you took the time to break it down & understand the meaning (in such a precise manner). Thank you, sir, for reading :)
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On Monday, January 21, 2013, metaphormachine
(133) wrote:
Hmm, the fury of a scorned woman?! I have two stirrings of emotions in me which exercise your lines & words now right to me ... emotional coolness, a chilly & cold personality ... & between the lines ... & also determines your intention ... rage / fury. Honestly said I don't want to be the one ... whom it relates ... w/ in your text ... & wish I'm not standing in front of you ... I like the rhythm & the seemingly random, but certainly intentional rhymes ... my favorite line is "chain reactions on the rise" ... this says essentially all about your something else, but impressive, meaningful poem ... & of course the last line as your statement ... dispute or war wouldn't I want have w/ you ... No, thank you ... but thanks for your poem! ;)
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