These Feelings

By Strataic

While my chest
Holds onto some--
Thing..

Tighter evermore,
Air- feels- denser
When she is here.

A long eternal
Tingle; I desire
Always.

Because my trust
In her...
Grew wholesome.

And ribcage
Sensations,
Stayed permanent.

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Copyright 2013 Cipher
Published on Thursday, January 3, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: for some reason i think u have much more to put into this

  • Strataic On Saturday, September 7, 2013, Strataic (100)By person wrote:

    You are mistaken. :) Scholar

  • Gothchic On Thursday, August 29, 2013, Gothchic (37)By person wrote:

    Quiet brief. Was enjoying the narration then it ended too soon. Love it still :)

  • the Id On Thursday, August 29, 2013, the Id (31)By person wrote:

    I think you and I know the same girl, man. lol You delivered this flawlessly

  • Maladroit On Thursday, August 29, 2013, Maladroit (202)By person wrote:

    Very pretty, Luke.

  • A former member wrote: I've read some of your work so far and it's very intriguing, also this sort of abstracted but short, is there a longer poem of perhaps 4-8 line stanza? I would love to read it. Thanks for the read :)

  • A former member wrote: simply beautiful... this a fav now!

  • Star On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Star (920)By person wrote:

    omg this is so beautiful. everyone feels this in their life time when they're in love with someone. beautifully written (:

  • PoetessDarkly On Saturday, January 5, 2013, PoetessDarkly (700)By person wrote:

    Cipher, why is it your poetry always gives me chills. ?? lol I like chills. Lovely poem, the imagery is outstanding.

  • haunted On Friday, January 4, 2013, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    awe how cute and i bet i know who this is for. you guys are so sweet and i can you pouring it out of your heart cipher. awesome!

  • A former member wrote: how it takes time to get use to someone and believe in them as more than just that nervous feeling... you penned it down just right...

  • FadedBlues On Friday, January 4, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    ...feelings that were bewildering, but become more comfortable & desirable over time...

  • Nehema On Thursday, January 3, 2013, Nehema (962)By person wrote:

    Its such a sweet sensation the way some make us feel. Beautiful expression - XXOO Scholar


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