These Feelings

By Strataic

While my chest
Holds onto some--
Thing..

Tighter evermore,
Air- feels- denser
When she is here.

A long eternal
Tingle; I desire
Always.

Because my trust
In her...
Grew wholesome.

And ribcage
Sensations,
Stayed permanent.

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Published on Thursday, January 3, 2013. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "These Feelings"

A former member wrote: for some reason i think u have much more to put into this
On Saturday, September 7, 2013, Strataic (99) wrote:

You are mistaken. :)
On Thursday, August 29, 2013, Gothchic (35) wrote:

Quiet brief. Was enjoying the narration then it ended too soon. Love it still :)
On Thursday, August 29, 2013, the Id (31) wrote:

I think you and I know the same girl, man. lol You delivered this flawlessly
On Thursday, August 29, 2013, Maladroit (198) wrote:

Very pretty, Luke.
A former member wrote: I've read some of your work so far and it's very intriguing, also this sort of abstracted but short, is there a longer poem of perhaps 4-8 line stanza? I would love to read it. Thanks for the read :)
A former member wrote: simply beautiful... this a fav now!
On Thursday, January 10, 2013, Star (879) wrote:

omg this is so beautiful. everyone feels this in their life time when they're in love with someone. beautifully written (:
On Saturday, January 5, 2013, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

Cipher, why is it your poetry always gives me chills. ?? lol I like chills. Lovely poem, the imagery is outstanding.
On Friday, January 4, 2013, haunted (837) wrote:

awe how cute and i bet i know who this is for. you guys are so sweet and i can you pouring it out of your heart cipher. awesome!
A former member wrote: how it takes time to get use to someone and believe in them as more than just that nervous feeling... you penned it down just right...
On Friday, January 4, 2013, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...feelings that were bewildering, but become more comfortable & desirable over time...
On Thursday, January 3, 2013, Nehema (958) wrote:

Its such a sweet sensation the way some make us feel. Beautiful expression - XXOO