Neutered Limbic system

By Maladroit

Shallow box of labels,
peel (pill) and stick the words-
with elusive definitions.

Nobody else likes to say it.
But I?
I don't know.
Definitive only applies to night or day(time).

So,
I continue to play with marbles,
because love continues to breed autism...

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Copyright 2012 Maladroit
Published on Sunday, September 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • tmanzano On Friday, July 26, 2013, tmanzano (207)By person wrote:

    Marbles are shiny and pretty. I used to have so many of them. For some reason, over time, I have lost them all. Great write.

  • A former member wrote: I love the amount of knowledge you packed inside of each metophor, how cleverly you constructed each stanza. This is an interesting and refershing way of writing I thouroughly enjoy it & am eexcited to see more.

  • Dreaming in Stanzas On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293)By person wrote:

    This was one of those poem that after I read it I just kept rereading it and smiling. It's clever and poetic, my favorite combination.

  • veingo On Saturday, July 28, 2012, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    To me it sounds like being sick of everyone pretending they're not pretending.. And not knowing what they don't know... A lovely write, even if I'm wrong... ^V^

  • Devilish On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh my god .. You should be illegal. I inhale your words like drugs. Powerful for each syllable .. You should get paid for every letter.. A B C .. Love it you.. Scholar

  • Maladroit On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Maladroit (198)By person wrote:

    Where the fuck have you been? :)


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