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Neutered Limbic system
By Maladroit
Shallow
box of labels,
peel (pill) and
stick the words-
with elusive definitions.
Nobody else
likes to say it.
But I?
I don't know.
Definitive
only applies to night or day(time).
So,
I continue to
play with marbles,
because love continues to breed autism...
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Copyright 2012 Maladroit
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On Friday, July 26, 2013, tmanzano
(210)
wrote:
Marbles are shiny and pretty. I used to have so many of them. For some reason, over time, I have lost them all. Great write.
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A former member wrote:
I love the amount of knowledge you packed inside of each metophor, how cleverly you constructed each stanza. This is an interesting and refershing way of writing I thouroughly enjoy it & am eexcited to see more.
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
This was one of those poem that after I read it I just kept rereading it and smiling. It's clever and poetic, my favorite combination.
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, veingo
(532) wrote:
To me it sounds like being sick of everyone pretending they're not pretending.. And not knowing what they don't know... A lovely write, even if I'm wrong... ^V^
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Oh my god .. You should be illegal. I inhale your words like drugs. Powerful for each syllable .. You should get paid for every letter.. A B C .. Love it you..
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On Saturday, July 28, 2012, Maladroit
(202) wrote:
Where the fuck have you been? :)
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