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Still
By GreekPhilosopher
Back against the wall
Mindful of the fall
Soul always cracked
Ignoring the fact
Bitter and scared
Simply put: unprepared
Facing the shade
Previously made
Perspiration to seek
Sublime so bleak
Falling forever
Stopping never
Things so hollow
The rest follow
Raise it high
Thoughts pass by
Not enough time
Express full crime
And remain
Still
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Copyright 2003 GreekPhilosopher
Published on Wednesday, July 23, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Still"
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On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, Rebel_Angel
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wrote:
Nice Write! I like the ending
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A former member wrote:
beautiful, simple but powerful...great write...
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
your "empty" but "full" words fall upon me, hard and soft, passive words lined with wisdom, offering so much........urban
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Lydia Jade
(1350) wrote:
Very deep, in its simplicity it is so complex! ~Blood~
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