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Nervous Habit
By Demosthenes
dont laugh at me.
you know
i always chew on one of my fingers
when im nervous
or scared
or alone
just because it happens to be my left thumb this time
doesnt make me immature
it just means
i wont have a thumbnail in the morning
and ill have to chew on my index finger
but dont worry;
by the time i get through both hands
my left thumbnail will have grown
and i can keep starting over
until you decide to come back.
-Brooky
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Copyright 2003 Demosthenes
Published on Sunday, July 20, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Drea
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wrote:
Demos you are an amazing writer. You comand attention with your style. Well done. Very well done.
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On Wednesday, December 3, 2003, Elf
(47) wrote:
this is EXCELLENT! you really are too critical of your poems.
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On Monday, September 15, 2003, Forever Cold
(33) wrote:
nicely writ..makes one think
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A former member wrote:
I Noticed The Name Demosthenes. It Reminded me of Valentine. Any Relation?
Well I Think That You're A Great Poet- Not That My Opinion Matters Much- because You Can Just Keep On Righting With or Without it. But It Is Kinda Cool...
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, OLd SouL
(734) wrote:
your style rocks, unique and interesting. you seem to be holding my attention.
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A former member wrote:
what can i say. . another great poem. You got talent gurl!
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On Wednesday, July 23, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I like it.
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On Tuesday, July 22, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
This one was fun and different. Just what I needed to read after so many cliches. Thanks!
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
nice i like it but i only bend my nails back and forth till they break off (lol) i like this write nice job
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A former member wrote:
I love this!!!!!
your so..AHH....I really like this....your so talented!!!! lovely heh...-¤Love Alley¤
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On Sunday, July 20, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
very Nice Write Keep it up! Thanks for the Lemon Pie poem...lol it is good!
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A former member wrote:
interesting..... captivates your attention so you finish reading :)** two stars
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A former member wrote:
Wonderfully written...I've seen you do that, too. P.S. I bite my nails.
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