Rain,Stars,And Laser Beams...?

By SweetEvilness93

The sky is dark,
Such a pretty sight,
But the ground is bright and soft,
A dreamers delight,
Rain is sweet tasting,
As it drowns you,
And clouds your mind,
Like a drug that,
You crave to take,
The stars smile at you,
As they shoot down,
Laser beams,
That will eat you apart,
But they're so pretty and bright,
You'll think it's just an effect,
Of that sweet rain from earlier,
You'll be alright,
Your skin will burn,
But you will laugh instead of scream,
Can't you tell?
This is just one screwed up dream,

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Copyright 2012 SweetEvilness93
Published on Thursday, March 29, 2012.     Filed under: "Fiction" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I don't know.Felt like writing,and this is what I came up with.
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  • Star On Thursday, March 29, 2012, Star (919)By person wrote:

    whoa i would like to have a dreams like this, but i really all i have is monster dreams when i have them HA but this is great, thanks

  • dwells On Thursday, March 29, 2012, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Never did like playing in the lightnening. Hard rain at night is like a lullaby, thanks for the thoughts and well done.

  • A former member wrote: it's nice and of course,it is a dream,can we control our dreams?can we?

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, March 29, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    ...it takes us to that place, rain at night, being entranced by it...

  • A former member wrote: Reminds me of directed energy weapons experimented with by top secret government agencies via satelite. Nicely written. Love the dream twist. ][ ][

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