turn left

By ruthless48

don't throw out i love youz

like lifeboats from your eyes

while we wrestle in a rainstorm

tombstone's muddy lawn our room king size

breathe heavy

bite my lip

don't let another pointless word

slip

spoil

take my hand behind my back

through your hair

i see rainclouds ~ trees black

animals

growl

and

you

only

will

please

me

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Published on Saturday, March 24, 2012. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on "turn left"

On Sunday, March 25, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Nothing like a good old fashioned knock-down-drag-out to get those juices flowing, thanks and much enjoyed.
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

thank you! (smile), cemetary was on the left.
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, JadedHeart (18) wrote:

I could really visualise this. Thanks for sharing.
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

gratzi ~ non fiction.
A former member wrote: I like it for some reason it's very simple but it's gets to the point. How I pictured this is two lovers not wanting to spoil the moment with words. Nicely written.
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

exactly, and as winders of words, there are times they should not be woven. thank you