Love me...

By A Velvet Tongue

Love me a little
I wont ask for much
A bit of your attentions
A remnant of your touch

Love me a little
Come, be my savior
Not an Adonis
More something to savor

Love me a little
My desire to ignite
Feed me a little
remain in my sights

Love me a little
Lap salt from my skin
I'll return the favor
Both sides will win

Love me a little
let me taste of your beast
Give it to me freely
You love me to tease

Love me a little
One who'll cherish your seed
My tongue longs to taste you
A ravaging need

Love me a little
She'll never know
To whom you keep running
Our little show

Love me a little
I promise not to tell
You know I please you, Darling
Our erotic hell..

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Published on Wednesday, July 16, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Love me..."

On Tuesday, November 20, 2012, MorganaRose (75) wrote:

I love that this gets darker the more you read.....seems like such a natural progression to the "erotic hell"... I love it! A tease indeed...
On Sunday, September 7, 2008, Lethie (12) wrote:

I like it
On Thursday, June 2, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69) wrote:

captivating and lip licking yummy!! I bow down :) :)
On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, Serenity (469) wrote:

Very interesting and just too awesome. Great write :)
On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917) wrote:

interesting piece...i really like it.
On Monday, March 21, 2005, BleedSilver (298) wrote:

Very moving and inspiring. This piece has a lot of power...
A former member wrote: this really moved the jesus out of me. i really like this a lot.
A former member wrote: Im pretty new to the site so, your probably used to getting comments like wow and jesus that was great so Im going to try and be unique by just saying Thanks for this one
On Wednesday, June 30, 2004, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

unique? errm.. not really. but a very nice gesture :P Vel, you little sinner. Lovely as always, hun. :::OLd
On Thursday, June 3, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

yummy write. sensual in a sort of way. cool. -MeL-
On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Angel With The Scabbed Wings (40) wrote:

Delicous art!
A former member wrote: Mmm...erotic hell. Save me a seat...I wouldn't want to miss out on that. Beautifully written.
A former member wrote: This is absolutely my favorite poem on DarkPoetry.
A former member wrote: just yummy, I want that hell.
A former member wrote: You are my poetry Goddess! May I call you my poetry Goddess or Mistress... either would work!!?? Your works are SO good! *bows and scampers away*
A former member wrote: I like this peice, it's sadistic yet very erotic, the best pleasures in life come in making love. You have a great definitive sence on this subject ;)
A former member wrote: this was breathtaking i loved it. well written, as always.
A former member wrote: Very erotic and naughty at the same time. I love this one. Sooo dastardly done!
A former member wrote: erotic hell huh? sounds interesting, good, sexy
On Thursday, July 17, 2003, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

a sweet little, sultrey tease. I love the way you develop it from innocent to something much more.
On Thursday, July 17, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Incredible! I love this line.... To whom you keep running. Our little show.... The poem change slowly, then just to end in this great finaly of deception and erotic hell ... Bravo!
On Thursday, July 17, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

i can say this one is my absolute favorite 2night!!!....caught me from the beginning and was satisfied till the end...all i've thought about in a an amazing poem...great job!!
A former member wrote: erotic hell, there's a place I'd like to go when I die