Neptune

For a day, let the tides roll

Let the sky and oceans weep

Carry me on wings of blue glass

Breaking shards from their watery deep

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Published on Thursday, March 15, 2012. Filed under: "Poetry"

Blame it on the writer's block.....

Comments on "Neptune"

On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273) wrote:

Your exquisite language put's me in a state of visual euphoria as i'm drifting off to dream from this read.
A former member wrote: It's good (:
A former member wrote: this is real deep
A former member wrote: Composed and defined with a mystical charm. Stardust words that sweep over the mind and leave a lasting impression and imprint. Thank you for the visual. And I appreciate you just commenting on my works, there's no need for detail. Thank you My Lady...
On Friday, March 16, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Sounds like the oceans will rest, while the waves cease, and the deep gives up her dead perhaps? How's that for a spin-off perhaps? Cheers!
On Thursday, March 15, 2012, lupus tenebrae (860) wrote:

Perhaps instead of blame, one should express gratitude, one of the finer poems the Block has let slip through its grasp. Many of mine never see the light of day, for good reason, as they're not remotely close to this. Very minimal, but that only enhances the imagery, Neptune would be pleased.
On Thursday, March 15, 2012, Little_Zombie (33) wrote:

This was a good writer block I have to say. Very well written I like it