Reload

By GraveFlower

Familiar faces disapear

Child hood memories Ive held dear

The world stared as I lost it all

I reached for a hand but they watched me fall

I became a tarnished star

Ugly up close and dim from afar

Left alone with no body near

Drowned in rolling salty tears

A lonly star that lost its shine

Faded away without leaving a sign

Wishing for some one to come

Cure my pain until Im numb

To polish me and raise me high

To sparkle through the midnight sky

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Published on Tuesday, July 5, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Reload"

On Tuesday, December 18, 2012, Fallenfromgrace (103) wrote:

very sad. I've always found that when you need to be picked up the most, that's when people enjoy putting you further down.
On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, Meadowhawk (160) wrote:

Well versed. Great flow and feeling.
On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas (293) wrote:

I know this feeling well and I appreciate the words you chose to bring it to life. Very nice write indeed.
A former member wrote: Ill say it here too, very skilled use of rhyme and vocabulary. And as for the message, I got a reinvigoration of hope and the promise of future. Well done!
A former member wrote: Oh and satan too
On Friday, July 22, 2011, cre (410) wrote:

I like it. I remember wishing for someone to come, someone to SEE me. It's harsh, it's real. Nice work.
On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, Devilish (2633) wrote:

I've got a remedy or two I can send your way... but there temporary... Nice!
On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, MikeShank1989 (92) wrote:

Sweet and succinct. Wonderful write!