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Reload
By GraveFlower
Familiar faces disapear
Child hood memories Ive held dear
The world stared as I lost
it all
I reached for a hand but they watched me fall
I became a tarnished star
Ugly up close and dim from afar
Left alone with no body near
Drowned in rolling salty
tears
A lonly star that lost its shine
Faded away
without leaving a sign
Wishing for some one to come
Cure my pain until Im numb
To polish me and raise me high
To sparkle through the midnight sky
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Copyright 2011 GraveFlower
Published on Tuesday, July 5, 2011.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Reload"
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On Tuesday, December 18, 2012, Fallenfromgrace
(104)
wrote:
very sad. I've always found that when you need to be picked up the most, that's when people enjoy putting you further down.
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, Meadowhawk
(163) wrote:
Well versed. Great flow and feeling.
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On Tuesday, February 7, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
I know this feeling well and I appreciate the words you chose to bring it to life. Very nice write indeed.
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A former member wrote:
Ill say it here too, very skilled use of rhyme and vocabulary. And as for the message, I got a reinvigoration of hope and the promise of future. Well done!
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A former member wrote:
Oh and satan too
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On Friday, July 22, 2011, cre
(411) wrote:
I like it. I remember wishing for someone to come, someone to SEE me. It's harsh, it's real. Nice work.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
I've got a remedy or two I can send your way... but there temporary... Nice!
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, MikeShank1989
(93) wrote:
Sweet and succinct. Wonderful write!
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