lost ones

By the broken

as his heart sinks
its only alcohol he drinks
he never forgets the pain
when he lost them in the rain

his heart already broke
only wishing to just die and choke
losing so many
can only wish i just never lost any


my friends like the drops of blood
falling down my eyes
as my soul just screams and crys
as my heart and everyone just dies
because of some stubborn sighs

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Monday, May 23, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

i am an idiot
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