The old young man.
By Iwas
I could play a game.
Maybe watch a movie.
Listen to music.
While I drink my coffee.
As long as I'm not outside.
The
sun's just way to bright.
Today is a good day to hide.
I don't
want to be out living life.
I have fought many battles.
Running
hard day after day.
I have floored many throttles.
And I usually
got away.
But now my bones are breaking.
My mind is losing
interest.
Old injuries are aching.
I can't continue to pass lifes
tests.
I made the mistake of not loving enough.
Now I
face these trials alone.
But my emotions are still tough enough.
So I will face it like a stone.
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Copyright 2011 Iwas
Published on Wednesday, May 18, 2011.
Filed under:
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On Monday, May 7, 2012, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
hits a little too close to home. the wrap up was perfect and powerful
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On Thursday, March 8, 2012, Clydes_Bonnie
(53) wrote:
Sometimes its healthy to devote days to the fuck everything mindset, well atleast thats what I tell myself sometimes..lol. Another great write, thank you.
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On Saturday, December 3, 2011, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
You put words, and so much more to paper, in a way I can only dream of... I've been dragged kicking a screaming into your world yet again, thank you...
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A former member wrote:
Youve described my everyday emotions perfectly
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On Monday, October 3, 2011, Cherry Bear
(25) wrote:
I want to comment on this poem, Really I do, but I think I need to think about it first....But for now I will say nice write and then I will get back to you with a better thought tomorrow.
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On Sunday, September 25, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Wow! Impressive ... I love your writting, and i'm so glad to have came across eahother.. I get a lil excited ..
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On Friday, September 23, 2011, soloiq
(24) wrote:
Rockin good write
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On Wednesday, September 21, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow, that sounds like a path that i walk constantly, it goes up and down.its usually down and i love hiding! a very good poem, i love how you share your emotions so freely. and thats good, cause thats not hiding!
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On Wednesday, May 18, 2011, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
Oh sad! Vividly visual. Love the last line.