First Prayer

By HeadpatSlut

First Prayer

 

The Feather of a Seagull and a bit of silver to my Lord-

The glorious hunter and Sea Master, Njordr-

I give praise to thy daughter, so glorious is She-

In song do I pray that my love be with me-

 

Oh, Goddess of battle who taketh half of the Slain-

I pray to thee that my lady love’s grace I should gain-

To Thee and Thine kindred do daily I toast-

And by Alfadir’s grace may I see the Plains of the Host-

 

By the side of the Sea do I kneel so humble-

Yet in ice water waves from the cold I not tremble-

‘Tis thee whom I pray to in struggle and strife-

I am steadily Thy faithful in the course of this life-

 

You who are Goddess both of Battle and Love-

I do ask that thee show me how to win my lady love-

Oh Daughter of my guardian, I give praise to Thee-

Please help me in bringing my fair lover to me.


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Copyright 2011 DK6_Marius
Published on Saturday, March 26, 2011.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

A prayer to the Goddess Freyja, who is the daughter of Njord, who is the great Sea God and Hunter.
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  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, May 2, 2011, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    A wonderful Viking prayer my friend.... I can see Erik the red saying this just before he sets sail... terrific prose, thanks

  • A former member wrote: well written, the verse/meter is discernible, if you were of a mind to measure the lines... the imagery is classic and offers exacting prayer for the age

  • A former member wrote: Oh yes. The old Norse. Love this. Prayer before love & battle. Dig it. Dig it. Dig it.

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