failing the test of life

By the broken

feel a breath
on the back of your neck
that is death
hes puttin you in check

scythe in one hand
your life in the other

angel of darkness and light
god of fear and spite

you failed the test of life
you'll never feel the light

death sending you down
no time to sit and frown

all sounded the death knell
forever you'll burn in hell

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Published on Thursday, February 17, 2011. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

please dont base me on this poem this has to be my worst write i've ever done so when u read this dont base me upon it

Comments on "failing the test of life"

On Thursday, September 22, 2011, soloiq (24) wrote:

''god of fear and spite''.............and must we say he is good etc?..........might as well let the devil win in the end...uh o..you got me started...sorry bub...good write...and great topic
A former member wrote: hey ill burn in hell with ya welcome to DP i fail at life to