how should i die

By the broken

o sigh o sigh
how should i die

could be cooked in a fire
tried there by wire

bleed out like a pig
mabey my killer could carve his sig

boiled in a pot
that sounds so hot

sliced into pieces
shaped like large reeses

hung by a noose
they do call me a noosence

or mabey if i'm lucky i could be eatin
before hand could be beatin

so many way to die
so little time o sigh o sigh....

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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
Published on Tuesday, February 15, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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Comments on "how should i die"

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  • A former member wrote: Kind of innocent and scary to me.....I love it!

  • soloiq On Thursday, September 22, 2011, soloiq (24)By person wrote:

    liking it.......and your ''sigh o sigh'' line.....i really wish i came up with that first man

  • A former member wrote: it displays the simple surrender of one's self in such a modern way, good write, hope it's not considered though.

  • A former member wrote: Good write, despite the fact that in a way it is funny, it also shows the darker side of the emotions that have been put into this, so like i said, good write :)

  • A former member wrote: Lol that was funny. Good poem I like it.


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