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self
By the broken
one eye is black
one eye is white
but both still have a heaven's
light
when in sight the soul is black
when out the soul is white
the color of a soul
of a soulless man
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Copyright 2011 joshua lee mccourt
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A former member wrote:
That was a very interesting way of looking at it. The poem was very clever, and very well written. I wish it was longer, it was very good!xxx
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On Saturday, December 1, 2012, PoetessDarkly
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wrote:
soullessness and just rudimentary. in my personal opinion anyone that says they are souless doesn't know the difference between right or wrong and should be put out of their misery because theyare a blight to society. But if that would happen I would be the first in line lol wonderful pen though. makes a person stop to think.
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A former member wrote:
Short but strong. Well done (:
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On Tuesday, August 16, 2011, maliceman
(32) wrote:
interesting, idk if i ever viewed my soullessness in such a way
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On Monday, February 14, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
Nice contrasts. Something i love to read. You did it real well. Write on:)
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A former member wrote:
This poem is real good . :)
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On Saturday, February 12, 2011, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
contrast beautiful....
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