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Mighty Warrior (the calling)
By nightshade
Mighty warrior noble knight
Fight the terror that fills the night
Stir your bones and wake your mind
With lambs blood and Hawthorne
I shall bind
This rotting carcass to your immortal soul
Enter
in fill the hole
Draw your sword, brace your shield
For shadows
crawl across the fields
Death comes forth, scythe in hand
He
vows to make this his future land
Raise your sword smite him down
Pin his body to the ground
Merge his energy with your own
Forever
set in chiseled stone
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Copyright 2010 nightshade
Published on Monday, October 25, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Mighty Warrior (the calling)"
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On Sunday, October 31, 2010, Ashteroth
(190)
wrote:
Quite an interesting read Shade. Good flow and a story after my own heart ;) ~Ash
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A former member wrote:
*unsheathes his sword* how much for a merging? Does that include a good smite, too, or is that extra? j/k... well written, perfection in rhyme..... and I would say.. innuendo as well... pin him to the ground?
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2010, nightshade
(118) wrote:
Haha the innuendo was not intentional lol. However I must say that gave me a good laugh when you put it like that. One day I might catch you on and explain to you what it really is. Though there is a hint in the title :p
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A former member wrote:
"enter in, fill the hole"? not intentional.... like Zappa's Dynamo Hum... I thought the call was the mating call of warriors? No? The 'mightiness' suggested power, potency... the call the beckoning, but also the release.... well written... I thought it ingenious really, to take that which is most masculine in a traditional sense, and reveal masculinity's 'double-edged sword' ;) well done....
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On Sunday, October 31, 2010, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Lol, good observation. Like Nightshade I also did not pick up on that. ~Ash
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
Very nice man, this could easily make an epic Power Metal song.
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A former member wrote:
of the Rob Halford variety... no doubt?
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On Tuesday, October 26, 2010, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
More like Eric Adams, or Luca Turilli.
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