True Pain
By HeadpatSlut
True Pain
Bound and locked so tightly in-
Strapped down and ready to begin-
Forced to watch and feel all-
So high, so much the longer fall-
No feast this night, no mighty hall-
All loss, no chance to win-
Bound tight inside a heavy shawl-
Thrown out, apart, and in-
Stopped by yet another wall-
And deaf to such a lovely call-
Battered bones and broken skin-
Can’t breathe because the air’s too thin-
So sick if life, you rush to fall-
Let Death’s here, let him begin-
Nothing’s wrong, no, not at all-
To suffer is to win.
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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Comments on "True Pain"
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A former member wrote:
Hey man.... I think this is not a villanelle, despite the vivid imagery and well told tale.
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, HeadpatSlut
(257) wrote:
Didn't think i would fit, but I went through the time ti scrap and re-write it like it is now, so I figured why not?
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, HumanMonstrosity
(12) wrote:
Nice write man. I like this a lot. "So clear is seen upon the sheet, The wretched human stain" that was a good line. Thanks for sharing. Kepp em coming