True Pain

By HeadpatSlut

True Pain

 

 

 

Bound and locked so tightly in-

Strapped down and ready to begin-

Forced to watch and feel all-

So high, so much the longer fall-

 

No feast this night, no mighty hall-

All loss, no chance to win-

Bound tight inside a heavy shawl-

Thrown out, apart, and in-

 

Stopped by yet another wall-

And deaf to such a lovely call-

Battered bones and broken skin-

Can’t breathe because the air’s too thin-

 

So sick if life, you rush to fall-

Let Death’s here, let him begin-

Nothing’s wrong, no, not at all-

To suffer is to win.


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Copyright 2010 DK6_Marius
Published on Monday, July 26, 2010.     Filed under: "Horror" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Hey man.... I think this is not a villanelle, despite the vivid imagery and well told tale.

  • HeadpatSlut On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, HeadpatSlut (257)By person wrote:

    Didn't think i would fit, but I went through the time ti scrap and re-write it like it is now, so I figured why not? Scholar

  • HumanMonstrosity On Monday, July 26, 2010, HumanMonstrosity (12)By person wrote:

    Nice write man. I like this a lot. "So clear is seen upon the sheet, The wretched human stain" that was a good line. Thanks for sharing. Kepp em coming

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