He Died A Hero

By Malcholm Dark

"The twenty one gun salute fires into the air
A tribute so fitting for the man lying there.
All of his family, friends and lovers too
Have come to bid a hero his final adieu.
The man was a soldier and always battled well
He fought our enemies and the devil in hell.
He battled all his life till his last dying day
A chest full of metals, a real hero they say.
--He died a hero, full of cancer, torment and pain
his critics whispered softly and spoke ill of his name.
--He laid in bed, sniveled and cried as death hovered near
but did he truly die a hero?
                              That's what I hear..." 



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Copyright 2010 Malcholm Dark
Published on Monday, March 29, 2010.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • ColorMeToxic On Tuesday, November 9, 2010, ColorMeToxic (238)By person wrote:

    Touching work. I had tears in my eyes while reading it. -Beth Scholar

  • A Life Without You On Friday, April 2, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    A beautiful piece indeed, if you ever do decide to publish your work in a book format, (hint,hint) it would be an honor to receive the first signed copy, keep me in mind!

  • lupus tenebrae On Monday, March 29, 2010, lupus tenebrae (860)By person wrote:

    Amazing, a hero to the very end, and beyond, what a great tribute, it reminds me a lot of my grandfather, thanks for sharing this. Scholar

  • ubiquitoussoul On Monday, March 29, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    I liked how you ended with a question and response..Short but holding a grand picture and story...the flow is always so easy to follow..As always thanks again for the incredible read.

  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, March 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    thanks... more like a fable in this case...

  • Rowan On Monday, March 29, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Wow. I wish I could write like you. Your work is so beautiful, so creative. Even though this piece is short it sends a powerful message.

  • Malcholm Dark On Monday, March 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark (806)By person wrote:

    thanks... old soldiers never die, they just pass on.. remember us..

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