The Two Young Lovers
By HeadpatSlut
The Two Young Lovers
The two young lovers,
now are dead-
Where corpses came alive-
From them, this ground
was painted red-
In Death, their spirits strive.
They
loved like no one else could tell-
For them, nobody cried-
Without
a Heaven, trapped in Hell-
And like this place, they died.
A place with Hallowed ground is still-
The church before it, gone-
Evermore, this place has fallen ill-
And nevermore is Dawn.
Two souls together locked and bound-
Their bodies never buried-
While they lived, this place they found-
And Sins in Death, they
carried.
Their bodies torn apart by ghosts-
Nobody ever
found them-
The corpses to their souls are hosts-
And to this
place that bound them.
Ordered by the ghosts that slaughtered-
To remain and watch that place-
The ghastly shells, by blood were
watered-
Eternal in disgrace.
Possessed by souls, the
shells awaken-
Eternity, they vow-
For by their God, they were
forsaken-
They wait there, even now.
They stand together,
hand in hand-
And guard that graveyard still-
Their names forgotten,
their souls are damned-
In Death, forever ill.
Author's Note:
This is the sequal to another poem I wrote, but I can't put it up here because it's too long.Comments on "The Two Young Lovers"
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2010, Shortnlethal
(65) wrote:
well writin love the style ^^
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A former member wrote:
great poem!
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On Sunday, March 21, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Very nice write, devil. Love even in death.
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On Sunday, March 21, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
WOW! This piece was so cool... Well written, with a flow that runs perfectly... The visuals let me see everything, so sad, so gruesome, so profound... thank-you