Strangers in elevators
By Sin
its funny how the mind wanders to obscene places
when confronted
with confined spaces
the soft scent of lavender
had my eyes casting awkward sideways glances in the silence
tangled amid gloden strands of amber
that shined eerily
in the florescent light
like a mishaped halo
a flutter of lashes pulled my gaze
to eyes too pale
a blue to be left unnoticed
but her lips held my fascination
full and soft with dew drop kisses glinting invitation
but a strategically placed v-neck sweater beckoned my eyes
lower still
to milky skin and the supple curve of breasts
I wonder if she sees me looking?
I wonder if she sees
the envy in my eyes?
I wonder what it would be like to caress all
that perfect flesh?
I wonder if she can smell the lust?
I wonder why the hell its taking so long to get to the 5th floor and
how long will it take once i leave this small space before I forget her
perfect little face?
oh how the mind wanders in sick little
fascinating ways
while battling the mundane of our day to day
Comments on "Strangers in elevators"
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On Saturday, January 3, 2015, drasticdaydreams
(55) wrote:
This piece draws you right into the character. Makes the reader feel guilty and fully sympathise. After all, everyones done this.
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A former member wrote:
hehehe.. love it!!
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On Tuesday, February 2, 2010, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
i really enjoyed this write, -symph-
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On Tuesday, February 2, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
You really captured the moment well here. This was sexy and yet lighthearted. Glad to see you post something new :)