Rage to a childs tune

By Iwas

I want to stab you, shoot you, take your scalp.
Beat you, kick you, scream for help.

I need to hurt you, scar you, please take heed.
Hit you, cut you, make you bleed.

I crave to strike you, fight you, feel the pain.
punch you, break you, you will be slain.

I yearn to shank you, fillet you,feel free to cry.
Bust you, kill you, I'll tell you why.

Because I fucking hate you till the day I die.

 

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Copyright 2009 Iwas
Published on Tuesday, September 22, 2009.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • BetaWolfinVA On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (791)By person wrote:

    Well done:) Was it written to write or was there an intended recipient? Scholar

  • A former member wrote: im new to DarkPoetry and this was one of my favorites before i even joined. i feel your anger too but i try keep in mind of how everything seems to have a way of working things out. great work. Scholar

  • Devilish On Saturday, September 24, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Yes!!!! Oh yes.... Every word .... perfect.... Scholar

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Great write, I like your style the flow was a thing of beauty. Thank you for sharing =)

  • A former member wrote: I had to come back and read it again , this was great :)

  • Deaths Apostle On Friday, October 2, 2009, Deaths Apostle (65)By person wrote:

    *cries* it's so beautiful...lol

  • A former member wrote: rage is like a beautiful oil spill.....thick and smothering and hard to wash away....good to let it out :)

  • A former member wrote: oh id sooo set you up with some bitch just to watch the organs fly....hmm. *grabs popcorn* let the show begin!~moony

  • Gray Vision On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision (424)By person wrote:

    Demi don't tempt him lol, I know I wouldn't.

  • A former member wrote: Ouch , guess i dont wanna make you angry :) this piece rymes and flows very well . good job well done .

  • Iwas On Saturday, September 26, 2009, Iwas (39)By person wrote:

    thank you I actually had alot of fun with this one.

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