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Rage to a childs tune
By Iwas
I want to stab you, shoot you, take your scalp.
Beat you, kick you,
scream for help.
I need to hurt you, scar you, please take
heed.
Hit you, cut you, make you bleed.
I crave to strike
you, fight you, feel the pain.
punch you, break you, you will be slain.
I yearn to shank you, fillet you,feel free to cry.
Bust you,
kill you, I'll tell you why.
Because I fucking hate you till
the day I die.
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Copyright 2009 Iwas
Comments on "Rage to a childs tune"
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On Tuesday, February 5, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(795)
wrote:
Well done:) Was it written to write or was there an intended recipient?
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A former member wrote:
im new to DarkPoetry and this was one of my favorites before i even joined. i feel your anger too but i try keep in mind of how everything seems to have a way of working things out. great work.
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On Saturday, September 24, 2011, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Yes!!!! Oh yes.... Every word .... perfect....
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Great write, I like your style the flow was a thing of beauty. Thank you for sharing =)
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A former member wrote:
I had to come back and read it again , this was great :)
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On Friday, October 2, 2009, Deaths Apostle
(65) wrote:
*cries* it's so beautiful...lol
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A former member wrote:
rage is like a beautiful oil spill.....thick and smothering and hard to wash away....good to let it out :)
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A former member wrote:
oh id sooo set you up with some bitch just to watch the organs fly....hmm. *grabs popcorn* let the show begin!~moony
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Demi don't tempt him lol, I know I wouldn't.
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A former member wrote:
Ouch , guess i dont wanna make you angry :) this piece rymes and flows very well . good job well done .
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On Saturday, September 26, 2009, Iwas
(39) wrote:
thank you I actually had alot of fun with this one.
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