god of thunder

By ebonyamore

I miss the thunderstorms that we shared
silent
as the wind bled over the fields, bending ear and stalk
to its clever fugue,
only the first sign of what was to come...
the beginning loop in a spiral of descent into madness, anarchy and passion.
with heady sighs and demented kisses it would engulf us as we laid there on a bed of writhing grass,
feeling it ascend
watching it grow
hearing it groan
in staccato bursts of unstoppable force.
and with starbursts like fireworks and sonic booms the lips of heaven would touch the breast of earth,
uncoiling and rolling in an electrifying serpentine dance,
scorching beyond recourse until even in its saturation the earth was parched and in need...
dizzy and confused in the heady rush of
strike and retreat,
caress and pull back.
and the thunder was in our ears, building from soft slow rumbles to bellows of demand and release and the rains burst forth with unstoppable force, sacrificing its own power to the needs of the earth that receives it gratefully and happily, the clouds spending themselves, slowing the storm gently until it was over...
until next time

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© 2009 ebonyamore
Published on Sunday, July 12, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Your works have a wonderful and direct voice evoking strong feelings.

  • A former member wrote: This was awesome!

  • Riven Waker On Saturday, October 3, 2009, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    roils and surges like a great serpent of hellfire and lightning

  • A former member wrote: sensual allegory ... makes me think of maggot brain... mother earth is pregnant for the 3rd time... cuz ya'll have knocked her up.... the nature of a storm never seemed so sexual before.... makes one long for spring again.

  • A former member wrote: I think I sense a storm abrewing... something this way comes....

  • Gideon Lost On Sunday, July 12, 2009, Gideon Lost (138)By person wrote:

    What powerful imagery you have woven into this brilliant pieces. Kudos my fellow poet. I am indebted to you. I feel like a voyeur; a virgin at an orgy. Grats and thank you for sharing. -Gideon

  • tinkdarkchyld On Sunday, July 12, 2009, tinkdarkchyld (25)By person wrote:

    it was very moving and artfully laid down. lovely, i enjoyed it very much dearest.

  • Vicious Pixie On Sunday, July 12, 2009, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    beautiful. erotic. suggestive and rich without being over the top. just lovley

  • whisperer On Sunday, July 12, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    i like

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